The visuals were nicely done, but....
you really should take more care in both your spelling and grammar, both of which are atrocious. perhaps a remedial English class would help. bad spelling and grammar basically destroys the enjoyment for me of many of the animations on this site. if you want to be professional, you also have to pay attention to language, especially if you want to communicate clearly.
Please take a remedial English language course
I was going to give you good marks, until I saw your atrocious use of language. I suggest you take a grammar course, or at least have someone knowledgable proof-read your texts.
what is this >.>? a english exam?
A brilliant non-linear post-apocalyptic serial
This is a wonderfully haunting and melancholic fictional series that has a touch of Cronenberg, Beckett, Kafka and Lovecraft.
It's non-linear treatment is in keeping with its subject matter that resonates a future wasteland where humanity could only be considered a mutation.
Those with little imagination, and who are incapable of what Coleridge called "the suspension of disbelief" will remain as bewildered as their own lives in perceiving the artwork in David's haunting imagery and innuendos.
yup, he's a racist pig
Well, I'll give it a good blam.
You need a remedial course in spelling.
You should get some English spelling courses. It should be "A Beer Too Much" not "A Beer To Much", unless of course you mean to give a beer to much, but will much drink it?
I will sign up to one right away. thank you.
Check your grammar
You might correct your grammar where you say "a great evil was bestowed us". You can not "bestow" a person; you bestow (i.e. give to) something upon a person or persons. So what did this great evil bestow upon the people. Perhaps you meant to sat that "a great evil descended or fell upon the people"?
Very good, however...
I do think you should give credit to whomever provided the music.
I wrote it in the author comments and in the music thing to the left. Although, once agian. The song is by Enya off the Gladiator Soundtrack. Now we can all die happy.
check your spelling
it's "emerge" not "imerge"
Yeah, I usually go back through and catch grammarical errors and typos hence why it states this flash will be improved on its next release.
But thanks for pointing that out.
Terrific, surreal, unique and haunting.
Perhaps what Samuel Beckett would do if he had pursued flash instead of writing. A kind of "Molloy" for Christmas.
Excellent concept well executed
A step above the normal fare, with feeling and a terrific song.
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