The visuals were nicely done, but....
you really should take more care in both your spelling and grammar, both of which are atrocious. perhaps a remedial English class would help. bad spelling and grammar basically destroys the enjoyment for me of many of the animations on this site. if you want to be professional, you also have to pay attention to language, especially if you want to communicate clearly.
Please take a remedial English language course
I was going to give you good marks, until I saw your atrocious use of language. I suggest you take a grammar course, or at least have someone knowledgable proof-read your texts.
what is this >.>? a english exam?
A brilliant non-linear post-apocalyptic serial
This is a wonderfully haunting and melancholic fictional series that has a touch of Cronenberg, Beckett, Kafka and Lovecraft.
It's non-linear treatment is in keeping with its subject matter that resonates a future wasteland where humanity could only be considered a mutation.
Those with little imagination, and who are incapable of what Coleridge called "the suspension of disbelief" will remain as bewildered as their own lives in perceiving the artwork in David's haunting imagery and innuendos.
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